We had our third crit today, it was structured much better than most crits, in groups we lay our progress so far out on tables individually and then swapped rooms so whilst the crit happened we couldn't talk about our own work, this usually proves quite difficult to crit some peoples work resulting in confusing feedback, but Phil our new tutor added an extra section to the crit where we sat down after wards and discussed the feedback with other class mates, this solved the confusion and helped us understand the problems with our own work.
The feedback i received was as expected, unfortunately i didn't have a great deal for the crit so it would have been difficult asses my work so far, the main problem i had was my Gent No. 5 logo not being legible enough, some read it as CENT others read the 'N' as and X instead.
This is the original logo, i can see the problems much more now since they have been mentioned, i rectified these as best i felt they could be, i added fine lines connecting the serifs to the the other parts of the letter.
I'm happy with the bottom logo the other seems to be missing something still, i will continue to develop this logo but don't think i'll be spending much more time on it as i need to focus my other briefs.
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